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发表于 2015-1-29 14:22:29 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

胡燕双

毕业于厦门大学,英美文学专业硕士,酷爱英美文学和写作; 读研期间多次担任中国进出口商品交易会翻译,同时完成上万字的英文小论文,四年教学经验


    随着2015年第一场SAT考试的结束,今年的第一个essay题目也随之揭晓(撒花)。天道名师胡燕双为大家整理出了1月25日SAT考试的范文分析,大家可以参考了解一下。

本文为天道教育培训部名师胡燕双老师原创,转载请注明出处和作者,违者必究!

  看到这个题目(Can people have too much enthusiasm?),绝大多数考生都会心花怒放,心里不由唱起那句‘你是我的小啊小苹果,怎么爱你都不嫌多…’。没错,这个题目是典型的成功要素题目,是考前一定会准备的题目类型。如果有些小盆友觉得它难的话,那老师只能说‘我跟你什么仇什么怨啊,连这个题目的文章都不给我’。

  题目的Excerpt明确说到:“enthusiasm有时候会妨碍人们思考,所以有enthusiasm到底好不好?”。现实告诉我们, 有了enthusiasm ’技术宅’ 可以成为‘IT巨头’(Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg),有了enthusiasm‘土肥圆’可以变身‘白富美’(Madonna Ciccone, Taylor Swift)。但事情也可能成为另外一种情况,当人们不加思考的对事情保持过度enthusiasm时,‘人生赢家’往往会变成‘反面教材’(Justin Bieber, Jaycee Chan)。因此,同学们可以根据自己想法来确定自己的观点和需要的素材,观点没有唯一答案,只要道理够persuasive考官就会青睐你的文章。

  在此,附上一篇范文,供大家闲暇之余品读

  Enthusiasm, as one of the most attractive qualities, is regarded as an inner force for people to complete work easier and make their lives shiner. As Douglas MacArthur said, “Years wrinkle the skin, but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul”. Nevertheless, as absolute perfection can never be achieved, enthusiasm cannot always be beneficial. When people show too much enthusiasm without careful thinking, the consequences may be undesirable. Thus, people can have enthusiasm but should be cautious about its extent.

  With enthusiasm, people are likely to show perseverance, resilience and other positive attitudes. When one is experiencing the pressure and frustration coming from stereotypical rules, it is enthusiasm that motivates him to keep going, finally making his own voice heard. Aaron Brooks, one of the greatest small-sized point guards, was an epitome of showing enthusiasm in American sports history. Born in a normal black family, little Brooks had been pinned down as someone who shall never excel in basketball playing because of his weakened and skinny body. Due to his enthusiasm in basketball, he decided to persist in his dream. Instead of being swallowed the pain of discrimination, he strived by filling each single day of his childhood with strenuous training. Although he was often knocked down by those taller and stronger boys, when trying to better his skills by playing with those veterans, he could eventually play better than other seniors after practicing day by day. Within four years after he had been recruited, he rewrote the story of Chicago Bull with a legendary touch despite his tiny build.

  On the contrary, stubbornness caused by blind enthusiasm will result in terrible aftermath. The tragedy of the fictional scientist in the Frankenstein, or the Modern Prometheus, vividly exemplifies the notion that, without enough consideration over possible consequences, the enthusiastic pursuit of a particular goal can have devastating effects on one’s life. Born into a wealthy family, Victor Frankenstein is always enthusiastic to seek a great understanding of the world with scientific knowledge and he develops the idea of doing experiment by creating living beings through human corpse. The death of his mother catalyzed the reckless scientist’s dream of carrying out the experiment and he eventually succeeds in animating dead tissues, which leads to the creation of a monster. However, because of the difficulties in creating minute human parts, the monster was tall and hideous, with yellow eyes and skins barely covering the muscle tissue and blood vessels underneath. Besides, the monster murders four of the scientist’s beloved ones, William, Justine, Clerval, and Elizabeth. At a fit of rage, it urges Victor to create a female companion for him. Although reluctantly agreeing to do so, Victor decides to pursue the monster secretly in order to seek revenge for his lost family. However, he does not kill his work and the fail vengeance cost his own life as the novel closes. If Victor had foreseen the devastating results before the experiment, he would never put too much enthusiasm in doing so.

  Working and living enthusiastically can make people more satisfied with what they are doing, but too much enthusiasm may stop people thinking objectively. Keeping the degree of one’s enthusiasm at an appropriate level is of crucial importance.

  以上就是天道名师胡燕双为同学们整理出来的2015年1月25日SAT考试范文解析,对此次考试内容还有疑问的学子们可以了解一下分析内容和方法,希望这些信息能够帮助大家。

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